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Hideyuki KURASHINA <rushani@alles.or.jp>:
> 4.4 BSD $B0-KbK\$N(B book.9.sgml(Network Filesystem)$B$NM=Ls$r$*4j$$$7$^$9$G$9!#(B

$BLu$,$"$C$?$N$G!"%A%'%C%/$7$^$7$?!#(B
$B$[$H$s$ILdBj$J$$$H;W$$$^$9!#(B

--- book.9j.sgml	2001/05/07 03:41:49	1.1
+++ book.9j.sgml	2001/05/07 03:53:31
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
   <sect1>
       <title>Network Filesystem</title>
-      <title>$B%M%C%H%o!<%/(B $B%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`(B</title>
+      <title>$B%M%C%H%o!<%/%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`(B</title>
 
   <para>Initially, networking was used
     to transfer data from one machine to another.
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@
     $BB>$N%^%7%s$XE>Aw$9$k$?$a$KMQ$$$i$l$F$$$^$7$?(B.
     $B$N$A$K(B,
     $B$=$l$O5v2D$5$l$F$$$k%f!<%6$K1s$/$N%^%7%s$X%m%0%$%s$9$k$?$a$KH/E8$7$^$7$?(B.
-    $B<!$NI,A3E*$J%9%F%C%W$O%f!<%6$K%G!<%?$r<h$j$K9T$+$;$kBe$j$K(B,
+    $B<!$NI,A3E*$J%9%F%C%W$O%f!<%6$K%G!<%?$r<h$j$K9T$+$;$kBe$o$j$K(B,
     $B%G!<%?$r;}$C$F$/$k$3$H$G$7$?(B.
     $B$=$7$F%M%C%H%o!<%/%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`$,@8$^$l$?$N$G$9(B.
-    $B%m!<%+%k$G:n6H$7$F$$$k%f!<%6$O%-!<$rBG$D$?$S$K%M%C%H%o!<%/$NCY$l$r46$8$:(B,
+    $B%m!<%+%k$G:n6H$7$F$$$k%f!<%6$O(B, $B%-!<$rBG$D$?$S$K%M%C%H%o!<%/$NCY$l$r46$8$:$K(B,
     $B$h$j1~Ez@-$NNI$$4D6-$r<j$KF~$l$^$7$?(B.</para>
 
   <para>Bringing the filesystem to a local machine was among the first
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@
     identically to the way that they can do these operations
     on a local filesystem.</para>
   <para>$B%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`$r%m!<%+%k%^%7%s$K;}$C$F$/$k$3$H$O(B
-    $B:G=i$N<gMW$J%5!<%P(B-$B%/%i%$%"%s%H7?%"%W%j%1!<%7%g%s$NCf$N$R$H$D$G$7$?(B.
+    $B:G=i$N<gMW$J%/%i%$%"%s%H(B-$B%5!<%P7?%"%W%j%1!<%7%g%s$NCf$N$R$H$D$G$7$?(B.
     <emphasis>$B%5!<%P(B</emphasis>
-    $B$O(B 1 $B$D$b$7$/$O$=$l0J>e$N%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`$r(B
+    $B$O0l$D$b$7$/$O$=$l0J>e$N%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`$r(B
     $B%(%/%9%]!<%H$9$k%j%b!<%H$N%^%7%s$G$9(B.
     <emphasis>$B%/%i%$%"%s%H(B</emphasis>
     $B$O$=$N%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`$r%$%s%]!<%H$9$k%m!<%+%k$N%^%7%s$G$9(B.
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
     $B%U%!%$%k%D%j!<$NL>A06u4V$K8=$l$^$9(B.
     $B%m!<%+%k$N%/%i%$%"%s%H$O(B
     $B%j%b!<%H$N%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`>e$K%G%#%l%/%H%j$rJQ$($?$j(B,
-    $B%m!<%+%k$N%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`>e$G$9$k$N$HA4$/F1$8$h$&$K(B
+    $B%m!<%+%k$N%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`>e$G$9$k$N$H$^$C$?$/F1$8$h$&$K(B
     $B%j%b!<%H$N%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`$GFI$_=q$-$r$7$?$j(B,
     $B%P%$%J%j$r<B9T$7$?$j$G$-$^$9(B.</para>
 
@@ -64,9 +64,9 @@
     The complexity of remote filesystems lies in maintaining cache
     consistency between the server and its many clients.</para>
   <para>$B%m!<%+%k$N%/%i%$%"%s%H$,(B
-    $B%j%b!<%H$N%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`>e$G%*%Z%l!<%7%g%s$r$9$k$H(B,
+    $B%j%b!<%H$N%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`>e$GA`:n$r$9$k$H(B,
     $B$=$N%j%/%(%9%H$,$R$H$^$H$a$K$5$l$F%5!<%P$KAw$i$l$^$9(B.
-    $B%5!<%P$OMW5a$5$l$?%*%Z%l!<%7%g%s$r9T$$(B,
+    $B%5!<%P$OMW5a$5$l$?%*%Z%l!<%7%g%s$r9T$J$$(B,
     $BMW5a$5$l$?>pJs$+$J$<$=$NMW5a$,5q@d$5$l$?$+$r<($9%(%i!<$N$I$A$i$+$rJV$7$^$9(B.
     $BE,@Z$J@-G=$rF@$k$K$O(B,
     $B%/%i%$%"%s%H$OIQHK$K%"%/%;%9$5$l$?%G!<%?$r%-%c%C%7%e$7$J$1$l$P$J$j$^$;$s(B.
@@ -90,15 +90,15 @@
     protocol is described in
     Chapter 9.
     </para>
-  <para>$B%j%b!<%H%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`%W%m%H%3%k$NB?$/$O(B
+  <para>$BB?$/$N%j%b!<%H%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`%W%m%H%3%k$,(B
     $BD94|$K$o$?$C$F3+H/$5$l$F$-$^$7$?$,(B,
-    UNIX $B%7%9%F%`$K$*$$$F:G$bIa5Z$7$F$$$k$b$N$O(B
-    $B%M%C%H%o!<%/%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`(B(NFS)$B$G$9(B.
+    UNIX $B%7%9%F%`$K$*$$$F$b$C$H$bIa5Z$7$F$$$k$b$N$O(B
+    $B%M%C%H%o!<%/%U%!%$%k%7%9%F%`(B (NFS) $B$G$9(B.
     $B$=$N%W%m%H%3%k$HBgItJ,$N<BAu$O(B Sun Microsystems $B$K$h$k$b$N$G$9(B.
-    $B<BAu$O%W%m%H%3%k$N5,3J$+$iFHN)$7$F9T$o$l$F$$$^$9$,(B,
-    4.4BSD $B$N%+!<%M%k$O(B NFS $B%W%m%H%3%k$r%5%]!<%H$7$F$$$^$9(B.
-    <xref linkend="biblio-macklem">
-    NFS $B%W%m%H%3%k$O(B 9 $B>O$G=R$Y$i$l$F$$$^$9(B.
+    $B<BAu$O%W%m%H%3%k$N5,3J$+$iFHN)$7$F9T$J$o$l$F$$$^$9$,(B,
+    4.4BSD $B$N%+!<%M%k$O(B NFS $B%W%m%H%3%k$r%5%]!<%H$7$F$$$^$9(B
+    <xref linkend="biblio-macklem">.
+    NFS $B%W%m%H%3%k$K$D$$$F$O(B 9 $B>O$G@bL@$7$F$$$^$9(B.
     </para>
 
   </sect1>

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